I really love the music, but I kinda wished it faded out after the beginning because it competes for attention as I want to listen to what you're saying. Around 0:30, I want it to go into a lower volumen. Also the pause before "...patients" around that time, made me think you should have done a retake before that part so it continued to flow.
I can tell you scripted it though and I find the topic engaging. If you'd just work on your reading voice by reading it to yourself or a friend before you record, you'll find a consistently engaging to read it.
If you can bring this script to class tomorrow, we can work with editing. Maybe you can do this podcast again as a revision and make it much tighter and a great piece!
I really love the music, but I kinda wished it faded out after the beginning because it competes for attention as I want to listen to what you're saying. Around 0:30, I want it to go into a lower volumen. Also the pause before "...patients" around that time, made me think you should have done a retake before that part so it continued to flow.
ReplyDeleteI can tell you scripted it though and I find the topic engaging. If you'd just work on your reading voice by reading it to yourself or a friend before you record, you'll find a consistently engaging to read it.
If you can bring this script to class tomorrow, we can work with editing. Maybe you can do this podcast again as a revision and make it much tighter and a great piece!